Phân tích "In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 10/3/2024)

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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?​

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Dysfunctional families, lack of parental guidance, neglect, abuse, and unstable home environments can contribute to delinquent behavior among young people.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In a dysfunctional family, there might be a lack of positive role models for children to learn from. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Without proper guidance and examples of appropriate behavior, children may turn to peers or media for influence, which can lead to adopting negative behaviors.
      • Example: In the United States, a study by the National Institute of Justice found that children who grow up in dysfunctional families are more likely to engage in delinquent behavior than children who grow up in healthy families.
    • Main idea 2: Adolescents are often influenced by their peers. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Associating with delinquent peers can lead to engaging in criminal behavior to gain social acceptance or to avoid isolation.
      • Example: In the United States, a study by the National Institute of Justice found that children who associate with delinquent peers are more likely to engage in delinquent behavior themselves.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Assigning young offenders to perform community service can help them develop a sense of responsibility and contribute positively to society. 
      • Supporting idea: This also provides an opportunity for them to see the impact of their actions on others.
      • Example: In Singapore, a study by the Ministry of Social and Family Development found that young offenders who were assigned to perform community service were less likely to re-offend than those who were not assigned to community service.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Main idea 2: Supervised probation programs can help monitor young offenders' progress, provide guidance, and hold them accountable for their actions without resorting to incarceration.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Supervised probation programs prioritize rehabilitation over punitive measures. 
        • They recognize that many young offenders can be effectively rehabilitated with the right support and interventions.
      • Example: In the United States, a study by the National Institute of Justice found that young offenders who were placed on supervised probation were less likely to re-offend than those who were not placed on supervised probation.

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