Phân tích "Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 28/3/2023 & 2/2/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 28/3/2023)

Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Peer pressure can lead to negative behaviors such as drug use, alcohol consumption, and risky sexual behavior >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "CONSUMPTION" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea: When individuals feel pressure from their peers to engage in such behaviors, they may be more likely to do so.
      • Example: For instance, a study conducted in a suburban school district found that adolescents who reported feeling peer pressure were more likely to experiment with alcohol and drugs or engage in unprotected sexual activities.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Peer pressure can lead to conformity and a loss of individuality. 
      • Supporting idea: When individuals feel pressured to conform to the norms and expectations of their peer group, they may be less likely to express their unique interests and identities.
      • Example: In high school, the pervasive influence of a popular fashion trend can lead to peer pressure, causing individuals to conform and compromise their unique interests and identities in order to align with the expectations of their peer group.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Peer pressure can encourage positive behaviors such as healthy habits, volunteering, and academic achievement. 
        • Supporting idea: When individuals see their peers engaged in such behaviors, they may be more likely to follow suit >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
        • Example: Observing their peers engage in volunteering, academic achievements, and healthy habits in high schools across the United States often creates a positive peer pressure, motivating other students to follow suit and contribute to a culture of community service and academic excellence.
           
      • Main idea 2: Peer pressure can provide a sense of belonging and social support, which can be important for mental health and wellbeing. 
        • Supporting idea: When individuals feel accepted by their peers, they may be less likely to engage in risky or unhealthy behaviors.
        • Example: In a high school setting, a peer group promoting a healthy lifestyle exemplifies how positive peer pressure, fostering a sense of belonging, discourages risky behaviors and encourages individuals to adopt healthier habits for mental and physical wellbeing. 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Peer pressure can lead to negative behaviors such as drug use, alcohol consumption, and risky sexual behavior. 
        • Supporting idea: When individuals feel pressure from their peers to engage in such behaviors, they may be more likely to do so.
        • Example: For instance, a study conducted in a suburban school district found that adolescents who reported feeling peer pressure were more likely to experiment with alcohol and drugs or engage in unprotected sexual activities.
      • Main idea 2: Peer pressure can lead to conformity and a loss of individuality. 
        • Supporting idea: When individuals feel pressured to conform to the norms and expectations of their peer group, they may be less likely to express their unique interests and identities.
        • Example:  In high school, the pervasive influence of a popular fashion trend can lead to peer pressure, causing individuals to conform and compromise their unique interests and identities in order to align with the expectations of their peer group.

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