Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề "DESCRIBE A LONG-TERM GOAL YOU WOULD LIKE TO ACHIEVE" IELTS SPEAKING
I. Đề bài
DESCRIBE A LONG-TERM GOAL YOU WOULD LIKE TO ACHIEVE
You should say:
- How long you have had this goal
- What the goal is
- How you will achieve it
- And explain why you set this goal
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "future plan" & "ambition"
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:
- How long you have had this goal
- I have had the long-term goal of achieving financial freedom for the past decade.
- What the goal is
- The goal is to attain a level of financial stability and independence that allows me to meet my needs, pursue personal interests, and face unexpected challenges without significant financial stress>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
- How you will achieve it
- To achieve this goal, I have been focusing on several key strategies. Firstly, I have been diligently saving and investing, aiming to build a diversified portfolio that can generate passive income over time. Additionally, I have been working towards increasing my financial literacy, regularly reviewing and adjusting my budget, and seeking opportunities for career advancement and skill development to enhance my earning potential.
- And explain why you set this goal
- Main idea 1: I set the goal of financial freedom because I believe it provides the flexibility and autonomy to make choices based on personal values and aspirations rather than financial constraints.
- Supporting idea: This includes the ability to pursue meaningful experiences, support charitable causes, and have a sense of security for the future.
- Main idea 2: Moreover, achieving financial freedom aligns with my desire for a balanced and fulfilling life, allowing me to allocate time and resources to activities that bring joy and contribute positively to both personal and societal well-being.
- Supporting idea: Financial freedom not only eliminates the stress associated with financial constraints but also opens up opportunities for personal development and community involvement. With the ability to allocate time and resources as desired, individuals can pursue passions, engage in hobbies, and invest in experiences that bring joy and fulfillment.
- Main idea 1: I set the goal of financial freedom because I believe it provides the flexibility and autonomy to make choices based on personal values and aspirations rather than financial constraints.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Today, I would like to tell you about a long-term goal I’ve been passionately pursuing for over a decade—achieving financial freedom.
I’ve had this lifelong aspiration (lifelong aspiration – khát vọng kéo dài cả đời | goal, ambition, dream) since I was in my early twenties. The goal is to reach a point where I can comfortably meet all my financial needs and still have the freedom to explore personal interests, help others, and deal with any unexpected life events without feeling financially constrained.
To make this a reality, I’ve been implementing several strategies. I consistently save and invest with the aim of building a diversified portfolio (diversified portfolio – danh mục đầu tư đa dạng | mixed investment set, varied holdings, spread-out assets), which can help me generate passive income (passive income – thu nhập thụ động | money made without active effort, residual income, automatic earnings). I'm also deeply committed to improving my financial literacy (financial literacy – kiến thức tài chính | money management knowledge, economic understanding, budgeting skills). This includes tracking my expenses, reviewing my budget monthly, and actively seeking career advancement opportunities (career advancement opportunities – cơ hội phát triển nghề nghiệp | promotion chances, professional growth paths, job mobility) to increase my income stream.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
Now, as for why I set this goal, there are two main reasons.
First, I believe financial freedom offers the autonomy to make life decisions based on my values rather than monetary limitations. It means I can travel to new places, support philanthropic causes (philanthropic causes – những mục tiêu từ thiện | charity work, social initiatives, giving back) that matter to me, and prepare for the future with peace of mind.
Second, this goal perfectly aligns with my pursuit of a well-balanced and meaningful life. When you're not constantly worried about bills or debt, you can devote time to what truly matters—spending time with family, engaging in hobbies, or even volunteering in the community. It enables me to live life more intentionally (intentionally – một cách có mục đích | deliberately, purposefully, mindfully) and make choices that bring long-term fulfillment.
💡 New Vocabulary with Definitions and Vietnamese Translations
Lifelong aspiration
Definition: A goal or dream someone has wanted to achieve throughout their life
Vietnamese: Khát vọng kéo dài cả đời
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: I’ve had this lifelong aspiration since I was in my early twenties.
Diversified portfolio
Definition: A collection of different investments to reduce financial risk
Vietnamese: Danh mục đầu tư đa dạng
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: I’ve been aiming to build a diversified portfolio that can generate passive income.
Passive income
Definition: Money earned regularly without active work
Vietnamese: Thu nhập thụ động
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …build a diversified portfolio that can generate passive income over time.
Financial literacy
Definition: The ability to understand and use financial skills
Vietnamese: Kiến thức tài chính
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: I have been working towards increasing my financial literacy.
Career advancement opportunities
Definition: Chances to move up or grow in your profession
Vietnamese: Cơ hội phát triển nghề nghiệp
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: I’m also seeking career advancement opportunities.
Philanthropic causes
Definition: Charitable activities or donations aimed at helping others
Vietnamese: Các mục tiêu từ thiện
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …support philanthropic causes and have a sense of security for the future.
Intentionally
Definition: Done with intention or purpose
Vietnamese: Một cách có mục đích
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It enables me to live life more intentionally.
✅ 3 Synonyms & 3 Antonyms for Selected Vocabulary
Lifelong aspiration
Synonyms: dream, life goal, long-term ambition
Antonyms: short-term aim, impulse, fleeting desire
Passive income
Synonyms: residual income, automatic income, unearned revenue
Antonyms: active income, earned wage, manual labor income
Intentionally
Synonyms: deliberately, purposefully, mindfully
Antonyms: accidentally, unintentionally, randomly
⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures & Vietnamese Translation
I’ve been implementing several strategies.
→ Present perfect continuous used to describe an action continuing from the past to present.
→ Tôi đã và đang thực hiện một số chiến lược.I believe financial freedom offers the autonomy to make life decisions based on my values rather than monetary limitations.
→ Complex sentence with relative clause and contrast structure.
→ Tôi tin rằng tự do tài chính mang lại quyền tự chủ để đưa ra các quyết định dựa trên giá trị cá nhân chứ không phải bị ràng buộc bởi tài chính.This goal perfectly aligns with my pursuit of a well-balanced and meaningful life.
→ Formal structure with subject-verb agreement and abstract noun use.
→ Mục tiêu này hoàn toàn phù hợp với mong muốn có một cuộc sống cân bằng và có ý nghĩa.

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