Giải đề"The charts below give information about the world's top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 9/11/2023) - Bài mẫu & giải thích từ vựng

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The charts below give information about the world's top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012

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  • Overall:
    • The production of milk surpassed that of the other surveyed dairy products. 
    • The European Union (EU) took the lead in the production of milk and cheese. 
  • Body 1: Viết về Milk + Butter (đều có EU, India & US)
    • Viết về Milk 
      • The EU's milk production amounted to nearly 143,000 metric tons, exceeding India's 127,000 metric tons and approximately 90,000 metric tons in the USA. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Viết về Butter 
      • India held the top position in worldwide butter production, yielding 4,500 metric tons, more than twice the amount produced in the EU. 
      • The USA's butter production totaled slightly over 800 metric tons.
  • Body 2: Viết về Cheese + Milk Powder
    • Viết về Cheese
      • The EU generated just over 7,000 metric tons, while the USA produced nearly 5,000 metric tons and Brazil, 700 metric tons.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Viết về Milk Powder
      • China's milk powder production reached 1,200 metric tons, a slightly higher output than that of New Zealand and the EU, which produced 1,110 and 770 metric tons, respectively.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The table compares (so sánh – compare: evaluate the similarities and/or differences between two or more things) the output (sản lượng – output: the amount of something produced) of four key dairy products (sản phẩm bơ sữa chính – milk, butter, cheese, and milk powder) in five different countries.

Overall, milk production (sản lượng sữa) was by far the most substantial, with the European Union (EU) leading the chart (dẫn đầu bảng xếp hạng – to be at the top of a ranking). Meanwhile, butter and milk powder had notably lower figures.

The EU produced nearly 143,000 metric tons of milk, outstripping (vượt qua – outstrip: to surpass in amount or level) both India (127,000) and the USA (90,000). While India took the lead (dẫn đầu – became the top producer) in butter with 4,500 metric tons, more than double the EU’s amount, the USA only generated slightly over (hơn một chút – used for approximations) 800 metric tons.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

In terms of cheese, the EU again dominated with just over 7,000 metric tons, followed by the USA (5,000) and Brazil (700). As for milk powder (sữa bột), China ranked first (Trung Quốc xếp nhất) with 1,200 metric tons, marginally ahead of (nhỉnh hơn một chút – slightly more than) New Zealand and the EU, which produced 1,110 and 770 metric tons, respectively.

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