Giải đề"In many countries today, people in big cities prefer to live alone or in small family units rather than large and extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 9/3/2024)

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In many countries today, people in big cities prefer to live alone. or in small family units rather than large and extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng POSITIVE > NEGATIVE thì có thể tham khảo bố cục: 

• BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao POSITIVE > NEGATIVE
  • Main idea 1: People who choose to live alone or in small family units may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members (lead an independent life). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "CHOOSE" IELTS 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • When they live alone, they have to learn to cook, wash and manage their finances independently.
      • If they live with their parents, they receive help all the time, and this may prevent them from acquiring important life skills and becoming independent. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh
    • Example: Recent college graduate Sarah's decision to move into a shared apartment with a friend compels her to navigate challenges such as grocery shopping, meal preparation, and bill-splitting, ultimately leading to the development of crucial life skills and fostering a sense of independence that might not have been cultivated living with her parents. 
• BODY 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao POSITIVE > NEGATIVE
  • Main idea 2:  The trend towards living alone  will result in greater demand for housing 
    • Supporting idea: This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents  and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners  to buy their products or services. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "buy" tiếng anh
    • Example:  A study published in the Journal of Urban Economics (2020) found a positive correlation between the rise of single-person households and an increased need for new housing construction. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In contemporary society, it has become increasingly common for people in urban areas to live independently or within small family units rather than in extended families. While some argue that this may weaken traditional family ties, I believe this trend is largely positive for both individuals and the economy.

The first reason why this development is advantageous is that it encourages people to become more self-reliant (adj: able to do things without needing help from others – tự lực) and independent. Individuals who opt for (v: to choose or decide on a particular course of action – lựa chọn) living alone must handle daily responsibilities such as cooking, cleaning, and managing their own budget. This stands in contrast to those who live with their parents, who may receive constant support, which can hinder (v: to prevent something from happening or make it more difficult – cản trở) the acquisition of essential life skills. For example, when a recent graduate named Sarah decided to rent a shared apartment, she was compelled to navigate challenges like meal preparation and bill-splitting. These experiences not only cultivated her independence but also prepared her for future responsibilities that might have been delayed had she stayed at home>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Another reason this is a positive phenomenon is its significant impact on the economy. A growing number of single-person households creates higher demand for housing, which directly benefits the construction sector, real estate agencies, and countless other businesses tied to homeownership. According to a study in the Journal of Urban Economics (2020), there is a clear link between the rise in small households and an increase in housing development projects. This surge (n: a sudden and strong increase – sự tăng vọt) in demand can stimulate job creation, boost economic growth, and provide momentum for innovation in urban planning and architecture.

In conclusion, although living alone or in smaller households may reduce daily interaction with extended family members, it ultimately promotes independence and drives economic expansion, making it a largely positive trend.

New Vocabulary with Explanation

1. self-reliant (adj: able to do things without needing help from others – tự lực)

   • Synonyms: independent, autonomous, self-sufficient

   • Antonyms: dependent, helpless, reliant

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "it encourages people to become more self-reliant and independent."

2. opt for (v: to choose or decide on a particular course of action – lựa chọn)

   • Synonyms: select, decide on, go for

   • Antonyms: reject, decline, refuse

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Individuals who opt for living alone must handle daily responsibilities..."

3. hinder (v: to prevent something from happening or make it more difficult – cản trở)

   • Synonyms: obstruct, impede, thwart

   • Antonyms: facilitate, encourage, assist

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...which can hinder the acquisition of essential life skills."

4. surge (n: a sudden and strong increase – sự tăng vọt)

   • Synonyms: upsurge, escalation, boom

   • Antonyms: decline, decrease, downturn

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "This surge in demand can stimulate job creation..."

Difficult Grammar Structures from the Essay

1. While-clause contrast structure

   • “While some argue that this may weaken traditional family ties, I believe this trend is largely positive...”

   • → Trong khi một số người cho rằng điều này có thể làm suy yếu các mối quan hệ gia đình truyền thống, tôi tin rằng xu hướng này chủ yếu là tích cực.

2. Relative clause

   • “...businesses tied to homeownership.”

   • → ...các doanh nghiệp gắn liền với quyền sở hữu nhà.

3. Not only... but also

   • “These experiences not only cultivated her independence but also prepared her for future responsibilities...”

   • → Những trải nghiệm này không chỉ nuôi dưỡng tính độc lập mà còn chuẩn bị cho cô ấy những trách nhiệm trong tương lai.

4. Cleft sentence (emphasis with “It is…that…”) – implicit form

   • “It ultimately promotes independence and drives economic expansion, making it a largely positive trend.”

   • → Chính điều này thúc đẩy tính độc lập và tăng trưởng kinh tế, khiến nó trở thành một xu hướng tích cực.

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