Phân tích"The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 4/3/2024)

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The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now

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Overall:
The common room has been refurnished to incorporate more facilities, especially in the communal open area.
(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the room has undergone considerable transformations in terms of seating areas and room amenities with a view to providing a more comfortable experience there for students)

Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1 (According to the plan from 5 years ago)

• Mô tả bookshelf:
  A bookshelf was situated on the bottom right corner.

• Mô tả khu vực ở giữa:
  There were a total of 4 round tables in the communal area, laid out in an alternate arrangement, with each of which being surrounded by small chairs.
  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: in the middle of the room were four round tables, accompanied by four chairs for students to sit around)

• Khu vực phía trên:
  From the entrance on the West, one could also spot, in successive order, a cupboard, a sink, 2 benches, a microwave and a refrigerator along the section to the North.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Convenience features for students on the upper corner of the room were quite diverse at that time as from left to right respectively were a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave and a refrigerator. Additionally, on the right side of the room was a cabinet)

Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2 (In the present day) tương ứng với Body 1

• To the South of the room, there is a new bench for students’ laptops, adjacent to a new television set with surrounding armchairs, which has taken the place of the old bookshelf.

• A new drinks vending machine has also been added beside the fridge.

• The two round tables in the middle have been removed to free up the space. To compensate for this, a long rectangular table with multiple chairs has been placed near the entrance.

• Except for the one bench that was replaced by an additional microwave, the row of furniture to the North remained almost the same.

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