🔥Giải đề"Many companies nowadays sponsor sport as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good for the world of sport. Others say there are disadvantages. Discuss both view and give opinion"(Đề thi 22/8, kèm bài sửaHS đi thi đạt 7.0 IELTS WRITING)

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IELTS TUTOR cung cấp đề bài:

• Many companies nowadays sponsor sport as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good for the world of sport. Others say there are disadvantages. Discuss both view and give opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm there are disadvantages of this
    • Main idea 1: sport endorsement could harm the reputation of companies >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH - Vocabular
      • Supporting idea: If the athlete or athletes endorsing a brand become involved in scandal, drug abuse, or violence, that brand could become associated with that scandal, and face consumer boycotts >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "VIOLENCE & ARGUMENT"
      • Example: Research published in the Journal of Advertising Research (2018) examined the impact of celebrity endorsements on brand image. The study found that when a celebrity endorser engages in negative behavior, consumers may associate those actions with the brand they represent, leading to a decline in brand reputation and potential consumer boycotts.
    • Main idea 2: it can be a risky financial investment.
      • Supporting idea: Profit, improved brand image or increased sales cannot be guaranteed for the sponsor.
      • Example: if the endorsed athlete falls ill, gets injured, does not perform well, there is a possibility that the sponsor will not receive the profit that they had originally expected. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp "Tất tần tật" từ vựng Academic bắt đầu bằng E nên học
    • Hoặc có thể tham khảo thêm một vài ý khác cùng IELTS TUTOR:
      • Main idea: When a wrong company associates itself with a major sporting event, it can tarnish the reputation of the event. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "MAJOR" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea: When young people are exposed to certain advertising, they can easily develop a positive association with those products and start to use them.
      • Example:
        • It is not uncommon for tobacco or liquor companies to sponsor sporting events. Since most of the audience of such events are young people, this sends a very wrong message to the society.
        • It is also common for sportspersons and teams to endorse soft drinks like Coca-Cola and Pepsi although they are not healthy. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt ALTHOUGH/ THOUGH/ IN SPITE OF / DESPITE
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm this is good for the world of sports & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
    • Main idea 1: Without sponsorship, many sporting competitions and events could not operate.
      • Example: Large sporting events, such as the FIFA World Cup or the Olympics, require millions of dollars to organise and coordinate, and sponsors provide a lot of this much needed money. If there were no sponsors, the price of a spectator ticket would be extremely high as this would be the only revenue to cover the costs of the event, and as a result, many people could not afford to attend, which may leave the event organisers facing bankruptcy.
    • Main idea 2: Sponsoring companies are able to gain publicity and recognition through their association with the event and the organization. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "company" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It leads to increased awareness of the company brand name.
      • Example: The Super Bowl, the National Football League's championship game, serves as a prime example of how sponsoring companies can leverage major sporting events to gain significant publicity and recognition.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In today’s world, corporate sponsorship (tài trợ doanh nghiệp – financial support provided by companies) of sports has become increasingly widespread. Although such sponsorship may carry some inherent risks (rủi ro vốn có – existing naturally), I firmly believe that its contributions to the development and sustainability of sports far outweigh the disadvantages.

On one hand, sport sponsorship can have several drawbacks (nhược điểm – negative aspects). Firstly, when an athlete or team associated with a brand becomes involved in a scandal, such as drug abuse or violent behavior, it can severely tarnish (làm hoen ố – damage or spoil) the company’s reputation. Research published in the Journal of Advertising Research (2018) highlights that consumers often associate negative actions of endorsers with the brand, which may result in consumer boycotts (tẩy chay tiêu dùng – refusal to buy products). Secondly, sponsoring sports events or athletes is a high-stakes financial gamble (canh bạc tài chính lớn – a risky financial investment). If the athlete suffers from injury or underperforms, sponsors might not achieve the anticipated return on investment. Furthermore, it is troubling that some companies promoting unhealthy products, such as tobacco or sugary drinks, target young audiences through sports sponsorships, sending misleading messages (thông điệp sai lệch – false or deceptive communication) to society.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, I am of the opinion that the positive impact of sponsorship on the sporting world is undeniable. Without the substantial funding (nguồn tài trợ lớn – large financial support) provided by sponsors, many major events such as the FIFA World Cup or the Olympics would be impossible to organise. Sponsors help reduce the financial burden on spectators, keeping ticket prices affordable (có thể chi trả – reasonably priced). Additionally, companies benefit from heightened brand visibility (sự nhận biết thương hiệu – how well a brand is seen by the public) by associating themselves with popular sporting events. For instance, the Super Bowl showcases how sponsorship can bring extensive publicity and reinforce brand recognition, benefiting both the sports industry and businesses.

In conclusion, although sports sponsorship involves some risks, its vital role in sustaining and developing sports cannot be overlooked, and I believe its benefits prevail.

Synonyms and Antonyms

• Tarnish

  • Synonyms: damage, spoil, sully

  • Antonyms: enhance, improve, polish

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "It can severely tarnish the company’s reputation."

• Substantial

  • Synonyms: significant, considerable, sizable

  • Antonyms: insignificant, minor, negligible

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Without the substantial funding provided by sponsors..."

• Affordable

  • Synonyms: reasonable, economical, accessible

  • Antonyms: expensive, costly, overpriced

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...keeping ticket prices affordable."

Difficult Grammar Structures with Examples and Vietnamese Explanation

1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Although such sponsorship may carry some inherent risks, I firmly believe...

   • Explanation: Use of concessive clause with although + subject + modal verb + verb phrase.

   • Vietnamese: Mệnh đề nhượng bộ “Although” diễn tả sự thừa nhận điều gì đó có thể đúng nhưng vẫn giữ quan điểm trái ngược.

2. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: When an athlete or team associated with a brand becomes involved in a scandal...

   • Explanation: Use of when + passive voice + clause to indicate condition or cause.

   • Vietnamese: Câu điều kiện có sử dụng bị động để nhấn mạnh sự kiện xảy ra.

3. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: If the athlete suffers from injury or underperforms, sponsors might not achieve...

   • Explanation: Conditional sentence type 1/2 expressing possible outcomes.

   • Vietnamese: Câu điều kiện loại 1/2 dùng để nói về kết quả có thể xảy ra trong tương lai.

4. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It is troubling that some companies promoting unhealthy products...

   • Explanation: Use of It is + adjective + that structure to express opinion.

   • Vietnamese: Cấu trúc này được dùng để nhấn mạnh quan điểm hoặc cảm xúc về một việc gì đó.

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